Story of a Photo
Well, this picture is very
descriptive on its own. It was taken by me, around the 10th day of December
of the last year. It is a little sort of grave where Eddie, my hamster, is
resting. The grave is in a flower pot, on my window.
Eddie was one my first pets that
I really care about (because the others that I have were when I was a little
kid), and he stay with me in a bad time of my life. Well, he and Amy, his “Girlfriend”,
and Phil, their son. Even the hamster that I wrote about a few posts before this
is from the same “family”. They made me laugh a lot, and I loved them very much
… even today.
I like that photo mainly because
of two reasons. First, and most important, because is in honor of him, that I,
like I said before, loved. And second, this was one of my first photos that I
take with a “real” camera, one of ICEI´s camera, and, since there, I like the photography
very much.

Sorry for your lost. It's very kind of you to write this few words in honor of him.
ResponderEliminarCohesion needs (again) to be checked. Consistency between subject and verb tenses is important to consider. check the following: https://www.englishgrammar.org/subject-verb-agreement-worksheet/
ResponderEliminarHamsters are really smart animals ! Really sorry for your lost !
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